Pretty good, but...
FAR too repetitive. I like the guitar, it's well-made, but...
(a) Too repetitive.
(b) Not much of a beginning.
(c) No real end.
Genre-specific issue(s):
FAR too strong drumline.
FAR too quick pace.
It's a good song. I don't think it should be ambient though, I'd put it under misc.
9/10 for song overall, -2 for the errors, -1 for the length.
-Skye
Its repetitive because I plan to put words to it later on. (Cuz lets face it, noone cares when its repetitive if it has words.) Same goes for the length.
I would call it...
Ambient/Techno. It's more techno-y in the middle, but it definitely has an ambient feel. I'd definitely stick with your own style, this is pretty darn good! ^_^
Now, things I'd improve on.
1) Mixing. I couldn't even hear the bass unless I tried really hard.
2) Endings/Beginnings. This basically is a loop, if you cut out the fade in/out.
Other than that, I got nothing. Good damn job.
-Skye
Hi, Thanx!
I allways try to create songs originaly! =)
I know the bass is weak but, it's kind of ment to be that way, like a lite tune..
Endings and beginnings: I could make them fade out, i agree, i'll see what i end up with ;)
Thanx for your rewiev and the 9, these things makes music! =)
Electronic/ambient artist. I started making music more than random scribblings in the fall of 2010, around the end of November. I think I've come a long way since then!
Age 28, Female
Mixing/Mastering Gal
University of Oregon
Eugene, OR
Joined on 2/2/11
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