Well, that's creepy. I like it.
I wonder how he's alive. Those injuries seem bad.
Also, happy birthday!
Yeah, something keeps him going.
Excellent as always, friend.
You always have a way of making things seem so realistic, and so different from reality at the same time. It's beautiful.
Thank you very much, my friend! ^_^
These are some sexy images.
Thank you very much, my friend!
Okay, so I'm not the best critiquer of visual artwork. I'm more a music guy. :( I'll give this a shot anyway though!
What I Liked:
-What I immediately noticed was the subtle background, how it gets darker in the lower right and lighter in the upper left. Nice touch there, gives it a bit of an ominous feel actually. Any particular significance to have darkness emanating from your signature?
-The right eye (well, right eye on the skull, it's to the left in the picture) stares right at me while the left eye stares off to the right somewhere - that was a bit creepy and cool.
-The fact that this is apparently modeled a bit off of a heart is odd. I like how you tried doing it - the blue around the edges also transitions nicely to the outside, especially the green. Of course, once I notice that it sticks out like a sore thumb, so it might not be the best thing, but... :(
-That grin. It looks like it's laughing at me.
-I see Lord Voldemort's nose. Or rather, single nostril.
-Subtle purple around the edges of this make it stylish and almost as if it has an aura around it.
What I Didn't Like Quite So Much For One Reason Or Another:
-The left eye (left eye on the skull, it's to the right on the picture) seems to have a bit of a messed-up pupil. The edges right around there also seem to be blurred and less circular, making it look like there was a tad bit of laziness in making it.
-It would have been nice if the flames trailing off the back didn't have an outline at all, but instead bled into the background.
Overall: I actually like this a lot. It also looks like you enjoy making macabre pieces of art involving skulls or monsters. Cute. Thanks for an interesting diversion from music reviewing!
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Cheers for the review dude. I take everything you said about the left eye and the outline of the flames. It could do with a bit more work done to it. Sadly I'm quite a busy chap for the up coming weeks so it probably won't get done but I'll have more stuff out soon so I'll use the tips on that.
As for why I used a slight gradient for the background, i simply made the piece look a little more professional in my opinion.
Alright, I'm not too much of a good art critic, but...
What I liked:
-The outline is really cool and not seen very often.
-For having been done in what looks like pen, colored pencil, charcoal pencil, or a pencil with VERY DARK LEAD, this looks awesome.
-I like the use of a T-rex skull within the body of the other T-rex.
-The tail is also done quite well.
-I also found it pretty cool that there are, if I'm counting correctly, 4 different heads, all with their mouths open.
What I didn't like as much:
-The face with slashes through it on the left threw me a bit - the slashes make it a bit disconnected and hard to see.
-The right side of the paper is unused! D: Oh noes!
Honestly, this looks really cool. I don't have much I can critique since I'm not very good at visual art, but... hopefully what I said was helpful.
This is quite a nice drawing, I can't honestly see many errors, so excuse me if I go nitpicky.
-In the lower left, right around where the hand weapon meets the pants, it seems like the belt buckle is transparent and showing the pants/weapon behind it.
-At the other hand weapon, there's a strap that seems like it's coming off the weapon.
-The hands have fingers that look a tad too rectangular and uniform, try putting a joint right before the fingernail and making that part bulge out by a slight amount.
-It seems like hair is growing out of his armpit on the left side of the picture.
-The markings, when going from his neck to his cheek, seem to act as if there is no space between them, they just go straight onto the cheek. Could be corrected by moving the markings on the cheek by a slight amount, so they don't line up quite so perfectly.
That's all I've got for things that could be improved. The background fits in quite well, the overall artwork is quite good, it looks very realistic, considering, and the little errors I noticed probably won't be seen unless you are either looking for errors or look at it for a long time.
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yeah, i didn't see the problem with the buckle untill after i had uploaded it and i think i will try to put more detail into fingers in the future,
also i really rushed the tattoos, i don't think anyone has pointed out yet that the tattoos have no shading!! "dun dun dun"
thanks for you'r review
It's a decent sketch.
Not the worst I've seen, definitely not the best. I do agree with Soap, you NEED to use a scanner. The quality on it is so much worse without one than it would be with one. The eye-lazer thing is pretty odd, I don't think it quite worked at the right eye, and the left lazer seems to bend a bit. It looks like the whole thing is cacling madly or something, and I'm not sure what that is on the back, part of a spinal cord or tail with bone chunks dangling out of it?
My only real words for improvement on this would be to get a scanner and color it in. I could imagine this thing being purple and/or pink, for some reason, with blue ears. But then, that might make it seem like a 4-year-old colored it in... I'm really not sure how it would be colored, actually, but that would probably make it look a lot better. Perhaps computerizing it so that there aren't pencil lead fuzz all over the place from the hand would be a good idea as well.
Thanks for the kind words. Aside from a bass guitar and a few other minor things I do plan to get a scanner/printer soon. :-)
Thanks for the review.
Ooh, quite nice! ^_^
Saw this and immediately knew that this was a good piece of art. For the cartoony style, it looks amazingly realistic. I very much like the impact mark next to the feet. She definitely looks like she's ready to stop running and fight back. As said before, the hoodie is a nice touch, I like the little, er, tightening thread things trailing out, giving the impression of having run from the direction they're trailing in.
My main issue though, is that the leg angle seems a bit off. It seems like she was trying to stop, but falling while doing so, but the rest of the body looks like she IS stopping. It makes it confusing to my eye. The other (relatively minor) issue is that the dark eyeliner and giant eyebrow seems a bit big and heavily-done. I personally don't like it. Don't know whether other people feel the same way.
Hope this is helpful to you!
She's actually supposed to be in the process of jumping backwards, rather than simply stopping.
As for the eyebrow. Well, I like it. Maybe it is slightly too large.
I think he's drooling.
No, really! He looks like he's drooling! I see a little blue drip going down his face. And I do have to agree with SCTE3, he does look like he wet himself.
In any case.
The plasticness of this art seems like it doesn't work. I understand that's how a lot of 3d art is. But try making it a little more realistic, please... I also don't particularly like how the whole thing is practically grayscale except for the skin. While admittedly, the character could only have gray clothes on, it's kind of boring when it's just all gray. The hair also seems like it's smeared with ash, and the pants turning up only in the front seems odd.
On the plus side, the textures you have are incredible, and the only nitpicks I have are the ones I said above. (not counting the ones that SCTE3 and Soap said already) It is really good 3d, even if it's a bit... odd in looks.
thanks dude :)
Looks like a burger. I'm not that much of a good art reviewer, I have to say. But what I do see definitely looks like a burger, and has a cool way of being made, looks like a piece of plastic. lol. Admittedly, there's not that much more that can be done with a burger, but... what's there is pretty darn good!
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